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Narrative Assessment

Narrative Assessment

Learning about Commas Friday 28th July 2017

What:

What I learned: I learned about commas and what they do. Here is a joke that explain a little bit about a comma and what it does.

 So if the Comma wasn't there it will be like Let's eat our Grandma for like actual. If the Comma is after Let's eat it will be like Let's eat something else not like eating your grandma.

I also learned (Well I kinda knew this except the last one already) that the Comma can separate units of a meaning in a sentence.

Example 1: It can separate items in a list. e.g. Danny went to Pak n save he bought bread, raw steak, lettuce and tomato for his delicious sandwich.

Fun Fact: Did you know that you could put the comma before the and e.g. (By the way it's the same example but one slight change)  Danny went to Pak n save he bought bread, raw steak, lettuce, and tomato for his delicious sandwich. Did you spot it? Well look at lettuce there is a comma there.

Example 2: A comma can separate a Subordinate Opening e.g. Although he was tired, Dan still went to the party.

New word I learn't: Subordinate Opening. What is a Subordinate Opening? Or you can also call it Subordinate Clause. Subordinate Clause/Subordinate Opening is a little sentence at the start to make it better like Although he was tired, Dan still went to the party. Even though "Dan still went to the party" itself is a sentence already, by itself.

Example 3: Well we didn't learn the third one but if you wonder what it is, it is a Relative Clause.(By the way a comma can separate a Relative Clause)

Next step: Practise more on commas and stop using too much "ands".

What i'm proud of: My Handwriting did get a little bit better and how much work I got done.

Here is my work:

CCD (Connected Community Day) Reflection

What:

I learned that Rock Slides and Astroids or Meteorite can make Tsunami even Earthquakes could make Tsunami.

I was involved in MasterChef. Our Learning Coach was Mrs Pearson and the other Learning Coaches was Miss Love and Miss Brambor and Kat? (I don't know how to spell her name. It's Selestine's Mom) The Group I was in made Rice Krispies. The Ingredients were Butter, Marshmallows, Rice Pops or something and that's it.

1st step: Put the butter in a bowl or something then Microwave in for 20 or 25 seconds then after put in the Marshmallows then melt that.

2nd step: Put 6 cups of Rice Pops in a bowl. After put the marshmallows and butter in the bowl with Rice Pops in there then mix it.

3rd step: Spray the cooking spray or oil? On the pan or tray then put a sheet of paper on the tray then put the Rice Krispies on the tray.

4th step: EAT IT.

The other groups made Trail Mix with Marshmallows and another group made Peanut Butter Balls.

It was actually pretty hard going to Pak & Save because we got muddy shoes.

I think the homemade Rice Krispies were better than the one we could but at America or something.

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Homophones Literacy Friday 9th June 2017

What are Homophones?

What are Homophones? Homophones are different words and different meanings but they sound the same, e.g., Their, There and They're or Two, Too and To, there are so many Homophones you could get mixed up with.

Homophones meanings                                                                            Bold Text = Homophones
                                                                                                               e.g. = Example

Different meanings of Homophones. Like Their,There and They're 

Their: Their means someones property. e.g.

"Hey is that our car?" asked Tom

"No Tom that is their car," replied Dad

There

There: There kinda means over there or like pointing somewhere. e.g.

"Dad look over there *points over to the mansion," said Tom

"That is a Oresome mansion, one day you might be that rich,"said Dad

They're

They're: They're is They are but shortened and it is like doing something e.g.

"Hey Dad look they're buying a Dog,"said Tom

"That Dog type is a Teacup Pomeranian,"said Dad                    

BEST LEARNING EVER NYLD (National Youngs Leader Day)

What I learned: I heard Aaron Jackson said Remember that thing you never did and I also learned from a guy named Daniel Flynn (He has his own brand named Thank you he sells water and some other stuff) he said just keep trying don't give up. He started making Thank you water because he read a article that homeless people died from dirty water then he started selling the Thank You water to famous stores but some say no and no and no and no again then he wanted to sell Thank You water to 7 Eleven and they said no and then he and his friends made a Youtube video and he said # something (I forgot what # he did) then 7Eleven said yes and then again they said no and no again then he tried to sell it to a big, famous mall or shopping centre.

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Reflecting on maths strategy 30th March 2017

On 16.3.17 I did a really cool math strategy it help me solve times or groups of, the math strategy was like putting something in a different direction then putting back together to make answer e.g 3x36=?
                                                                                                                                   3x6=18
                                                                                                                                   3x30=90
                                                                                                                                    18+90=108
so this is what it is about

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Cereal Killa Cafe Freakshake design

The Freakshake is the best iDevelop Writing topic I like in iDevelop Writing we get to created our own Freakshake,a Freakshake is a milkshake kinda it is better than a milkshake because it has these weird stuff in milkshake like cake or cupcake and cotton candy.My ingredients were Mint Choc-Chip ice cream for a holiday in snowy mountain and blueberry syrup  because I went to blueberry farm and      pick cockles

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